new as in you've never seen em
(sorry, but I'll get to the old ones some other time)
Math
Just doing math in a bubble bath:
2 bloody hands
plus lots of soap
equal one dead con
at end of rope
yup that’s just math in a bubble bath
5 men go in
minus 4 slit throats
equals 1 victor
with all the votes
that’s just math in a bubble bath
and speaking of math
take 1 crash
divide by 2 kids
equals 1 quick dash
and a red windshield splash.
and one loan shark
takes one hapless guy
and divides him into
20 mince pies
oh, and regarding fractions
it only takes 1 bat
to put 2 people in traction
well anyway
you know what they say
about doing math
in a bubble bath:
go over it twice
check every sum
cuz it certainly
wont be any fun
to take the bubble bath version
of accounting 101
Eternal bliss
At the valley of the dead
and the mountain of the live
where they come together
at the seaside
where second chances linger
where time doesn’t tick
and peace flows on
with the ebb of the tide
if sound would exist
youd hear at the reef
thousands of souls
breath a sigh of relief
where is this place?
does it even exist?
you need to travel
just through the mist
like a razor blade
slicing a wrist
if you cant find it
I’ll give you a lift
21 comments:
*wince* that blood was horrible. so much death. my teeth itch.
1.i don't even want to know what so many people are doing in your bubble bath.
nice though
2.good idea needs some work i think some tweaking on the rhythem and rhyme
trix- sorry abt ur teeth, maybe brush with steelwool? s.j- not my bubble bath, a random ordinary acid free bubble bath, im sure u know the type.
Loved the first one! Gory, and I can totally hear Eminem rapping to it, but still clever. Second one went way over my head for some reason. Must be too late for poetry.
walla! nice! i like em both..though o so different...(reminds me of sj for some odd reason)...yes its gory but hey not all poems are meant for ol ladies in rockin chairs.
im welcoming myself to ur blog.
even so.... when was the last time you had a bubble bath anyways? you're in a frickin yeshiva.
shalva- yup, m's my fav. poet. sabra- welcome! sj- trust me u dont want to know.
I'm not a little old lady in a rocking chair. I'm a big girl who can even handle stephen king (except carri for obvios reasons, there were also parts of dreamcatcher that were a little too much for me)
you mentioned liking a different stephen king book in your blog. And my lil poem is warm and cuddly compared to some of his stuff. (not really, he's not as gross as people say. iv read every book he wrote and he isnt that bad)
I like all his books I read, except carri and deloris clayborn. the second one cause it was still boring by the 4th page and there were no paragraph breaks. I can get through the blood if I know there is other stuff to look forward too, like misery, did that have and amazing ending or what.
I dunno if u got it, but it took me like a week to realize his point in misery and then when i got it I told my friends and they were like, no way!and they reread it and thay were like, cool! (and carry had like no gory parts)
im usually highly-allergic to math..but this one..nice!
ps- carrie was his best actually. and made perfect sense. the oinly gore was when they butchered the pigs and pured the bucket of blood on her head..i woulda reacted the same way..
in carri they were too mean to her. I thought the pig stuff was mean and gross (as was the rest of it) doodle-what point in misery were you talking about? the way he did what his book was talking about, changing the ending to make it good?
bigf-me2. thanks. i liked carrie but there r others i liked more. trix- sorta, he basically is pretending hes in same predicament, and makes her alive, i didnt realize till a week later.
trix-- that's just it. she had every reason to act (or re- act) the way she did. i applaud her.
and her mother gets me so mad. i wanted 2 strangle her by 2nd page. her death was 2 nice and easy.
yep
dood- thats why I liked the book so much. but I chapped it right away. flr-so why don't you care that they are mean to her. and yes her mother is supposed to get us mad.
trix- heck. i DO care they're insanely mean to her. I was only agreeing with doodle..what his feelings were..how he wanted to strangle the mother for her despicable actions..
so thats why I hated that book.
hes one of the few authors who never fails to bring out strong emotions in his readers (occasionally the emotion is "im never reading another king book again" but that just means hes good at what he does)
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